For this draft, I decided to take photos outside of school. These photos are less focused on everyday activities and more of movements in nature. I kept the last photo because I thought it looked really cool. My goal this week was to try and experiment with different environments for my photos. I was able to get more photos because I used a different camera and was able to get more shots at a time, which really helped speed up my process. Similar to my first draft, I struggled a little with timing which is why some of the photos are blurry.
I like the feeling that they are actually floating. my suggestion is to make the photos straight.
ReplyDeletei think these photos are awesome! they all look like they are floating which is really cool! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteI really like this collection because all of your subjects seem like they're floating. This helped you complete your "movement of nature" goal. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think your photos are great, I don't have any suggestions to give you, good job!
ReplyDeletethese are really cool , I really like the images with two people, so I would experiment with more groups of people.
ReplyDeleteThese are all really cool and dynamic. I love the vibrant colors in some of them. I agree with Ava about having more people in single photos. Other than that, I have no suggestions.
ReplyDeleteThese are great. I feel that the images with more than one subject has a stronger dynamic to the photos. I like the photos in which the subjects are occupied by an activity. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThese are so fun! I love the street pictures and the ping-pong table pictures because those are normal things that you made seem surreal. I have no suggestions, just keep experimenting!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job at making the subjects seem more levitated in this draft. I think the new camera you mentioned in the statement helped a lot, because these seem perfectly timed, nice work
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